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Veiled and Vivid



She'd stand there in the sulphyd mist,
Dark clouds that drain of crimson wine
With blood that grows upon the vine,
And barren trees in her hair tangle -


Eyes of frozen ash and rain
Doth scorch the languid Eden sky,
The gypsies glance succumbed for nigh,
The earth doust cloak thy menaced eye -  


Naiad fingers curl and arch
about the rivers, silvered sure -

Bend the boughs, thy faded leaves
mid-trodden ground, thy Dryad thieves....
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Submitted: November 19, 2003
File Size: 693 bytes
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Comments: 17
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Its short and not too complex, I wrote it in math class today.
Not one of my best, but its here anyway,

About (i named them all) mystical creatures who destroy the earth.....because. I haven't decided why yet, just an idea that came to my head, I pictures them enclosing the world in their hands and their hair draping across the rivers and such.....
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~Wyn--:iconWyn--: Nov 19, 2003, 5:28:09 PM
i like it

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My chest is aching, it burns like a furnace. The burning keeps me alive - Byrne
~ghostfly:iconghostfly: Nov 20, 2003, 5:50:43 AM
Ooh, tree spirits! Reminds me of the old Narnia story wherein the trees amass and charge across the battlefield like a black (or maybe just very dark green) cloud. Great stuff, although the second line "Dark clouds that drain of crimson wine" had me a little confused, just around the statement "drain of". Wondered if maybe that was a typo for " drain off" or if maybe I'm reading the word drain in entirely the wrong context.

Anyway, great work, as always!
~greumach:icongreumach: Nov 20, 2003, 12:50:35 PM
Impressive . OK Fav . All the Best

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'In the cessation of Creation lies the cessation of Existence. A species that does not create will die.'
~knightcross-X2:iconknightcross-X2: Nov 21, 2003, 8:02:41 PM
greumach like it much.. and i like it too bcoz its really beautiful. keep up the nice work!! :+fav:
~planoplayboy:iconplanoplayboy: Nov 27, 2003, 3:47:55 PM
nice... :hug: makes me want to put on a suit of armor and find a hot princess! or a slutty gypsie, i guess.

i like "Eyes of frozen ash and rain
Doth scorch the languid Eden sky,
The gypsies glance succumbed for nigh"

:thumbsup:

stay warm pretty girl!!1 :D

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Only the illusion of memories exist." --Heriishi Kirima
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~theinquisitions:icontheinquisitions: Nov 27, 2003, 8:43:49 PM
slutty gypsies seem all the better :)

thanks a lot :heart:
~tragicrabbit:icontragicrabbit: Nov 28, 2003, 1:34:59 PM
lovely work :) i love your way of writing, it's very unique nowadays to see someone who uses old english :heart:
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